I can see that what you're trying to hint at with the background once you told me, I just don't think I would have gotten there on my own. Also since its there I wish you would have had your type interact more with the background in some way. Perhaps its the organic image against the motion of the text coming out from a clean cut mask. I think your text is a bit of a one-trick pony, in that I can enjoy the un-naturalistic reveals the first time, but my brain fights to hold interest in it once I've figured it out. So yeah, really trying to find some way to keep that fresh each time would be good for you. That way I might not try to wait until the first line comes out, before I start reading it.
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I can see that what you're trying to hint at with the background once you told me, I just don't think I would have gotten there on my own. Also since its there I wish you would have had your type interact more with the background in some way. Perhaps its the organic image against the motion of the text coming out from a clean cut mask.
I think your text is a bit of a one-trick pony, in that I can enjoy the un-naturalistic reveals the first time, but my brain fights to hold interest in it once I've figured it out. So yeah, really trying to find some way to keep that fresh each time would be good for you. That way I might not try to wait until the first line comes out, before I start reading it.
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